I am tired and a little sleepy so I have no idea what I just made, but I think you guys might like it. tell me your thoughts and what I might need to fix.
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I do like this song but I think the main instrument should be just a tad louder because the bass is just overpowering it or maybe its my headphones
Mar 24, 25
guitar is off tune by a bit though it is hard to tell by how much
Mar 24, 25
I know what your talking about, and that I cant change that is the background guitar for the main one sample. I cant get rid of it. I wish I could, but that background guitar was made to be a bit off tune to add a certain aesthetic to the main guitar.
Mar 24, 25
the actual guitar Its just off by a bit
Mar 24, 25
on which part and are talking about the actual guitar and how it sounds or it's timing.
Mar 24, 25
those kicks are clean, and I was really hoping you'd build off of the first melody from the first 15 seconds and again at and at bc I really liked the soulful sound of it
reason I say that because I think it clashes with the more techno melody you also have with it
overall nice track though
Mar 24, 25
yeah like make it flow better as far as the vibe of the melodies, or make the transitions smoother!
the overall track and the notes are good and the melodies are good too
Mar 24, 25
and make the soulful melody longer.
Mar 24, 25
so you want me to build a transition to it as it switches from soulful to Techno
Mar 24, 25
or maybe its just the structure, like could be the hook idk idk, it just jumps from different vibe/melody too soon I guess?
republished
Mar 24, 25
I think I fixed where it didn't sound right. Tell me if I did it right
Mar 21, 25
need more work, especially on key, but you v got potential with this track.
Mar 21, 25
Thank you for your feedback.
Mar 21, 25
why would u put two sample melodies with two different keys ?
this song pisses me off because it's good, how dare ye make a good song >:( (/j it's good, good job)
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really groovy
clean
I do like this song but I think the main instrument should be just a tad louder because the bass is just overpowering it or maybe its my headphones
guitar is off tune by a bit though it is hard to tell by how much
those kicks are clean, and I was really hoping you'd build off of the first melody from the first 15 seconds and again at and at bc I really liked the soulful sound of it reason I say that because I think it clashes with the more techno melody you also have with it overall nice track though
I think I fixed where it didn't sound right. Tell me if I did it right
need more work, especially on key, but you v got potential with this track.
why would u put two sample melodies with two different keys ?