Wonder

Phoenix893
182 Mar 21, 25 Other
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I am tired and a little sleepy so I have no idea what I just made, but I think you guys might like it. tell me your thoughts and what I might need to fix. Cover Credit: https://www.flickr.com/photos/25936822@N03/4146823906

         
TV42
Apr 20, 25

this song pisses me off because it's good, how dare ye make a good song >:( (/j it's good, good job)

Hʊsk
Mar 24, 25

clean

Gilgamesh
Mar 24, 25

I do like this song but I think the main instrument should be just a tad louder because the bass is just overpowering it or maybe its my headphones

[nxz].wav
Mar 24, 25

guitar is off tune by a bit though it is hard to tell by how much

Phoenix893
Mar 24, 25

I know what your talking about, and that I cant change that is the background guitar for the main one sample. I cant get rid of it. I wish I could, but that background guitar was made to be a bit off tune to add a certain aesthetic to the main guitar.

[nxz].wav
Mar 24, 25

the actual guitar Its just off by a bit

Phoenix893
Mar 24, 25

on which part and are talking about the actual guitar and how it sounds or it's timing.

1017beatitup
Mar 24, 25

those kicks are clean, and I was really hoping you'd build off of the first melody from the first 15 seconds and again at and at bc I really liked the soulful sound of it reason I say that because I think it clashes with the more techno melody you also have with it overall nice track though

1017beatitup
Mar 24, 25

yeah like make it flow better as far as the vibe of the melodies, or make the transitions smoother! the overall track and the notes are good and the melodies are good too

Phoenix893
Mar 24, 25

and make the soulful melody longer.

Phoenix893
Mar 24, 25

so you want me to build a transition to it as it switches from soulful to Techno

1017beatitup
Mar 24, 25

or maybe its just the structure, like could be the hook idk idk, it just jumps from different vibe/melody too soon I guess?

Phoenix893
republished
Mar 24, 25

I think I fixed where it didn't sound right. Tell me if I did it right

Batoune & The Brewers

need more work, especially on key, but you v got potential with this track.

Phoenix893
Mar 21, 25

Thank you for your feedback.

the og tenjo
Mar 21, 25

why would u put two sample melodies with two different keys ?