To be honest Im not really picky when it comes to music, all I ask is that the music doesn't sound like someone took a steaming pile of crap. Oh and I never really got into Christian music, not saying I dont like god I just dont want to hear that music. I like some country music and some rap, I mostly prefer rap with lyrics I can understand clearly. I love the variety of different genres of music so anything could surprise me.
Could use some more saturation, but eh... this is really good for what it is. Just run your track through a quantum, cuz the clipping is nothing a multi-band can't fix. I also can't hear any sidechain, so make sure you sidechain, especially when making future bass, 'tis very important. Other than that, there are just some mixing and mastering issues.
This is fantastic and you've got some skill, and I'd love to see that grow.
I think this might need some arps or something more throughout it because it seems to be the same thing repeating but so far this is a beast of a track you got here.