I remember this @sbz. I really love the music that I crafted...
![Cover of track Smile, porcelain [Day 6] by Crazy about You](https://api.audiotool.com/track/smile_porcelain_day_6/cover/512.jpg)
Sleep in your smile,
they nights are long
and the days are short
you can take my heart on
always burnin'up
sea and sand, your hands
and my hands
touching your beautiful lips
only you seeing me
no place for anyone more
I'm breathing you, my porcelain
I won't take it away
cause you always can bring me smile.
I love you, porcelain.
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I missed you at that moment. Now I will miss you forever.
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This track that I made because I missed you...
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this track though..
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I really love how my old songs sound and I'm better now but it's so beautiful xD
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refav ..
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Wow...I love the atmosphere ... beautiful.
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You are very sensitive. Your tracks have a good and positive atmosphere.
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:) :) !!
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This is soooooooo k00L
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Thanks you dude, @tophat I'm agree with you, I know that the drone don't sound exactly with the melody, and I have updated the new version, I think that it is a little fixed, I think haha and @almate thanks you really for your full support I want that others enjoy this like I enjoy reading your comments or making my music :)
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I got excited when I saw that you finally published this song :). This is great like the other 5 days you have published. I love the poem as well as the other ones you typed. Thank you!
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very nice :)
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oooooooooooooooooooohhhhh myyyy gooooooddnnneeessssss my heart skipped a few beats at 0:48 !!! <3 <3 <3 <3.. so chillaxing.. what beautiful textures and subtle melodies to go with soft words..!
my only thing is, that drone under everything after 0:48 is not in the share the same tonality as the textures and melody itself and it really sticks out afterwards at 1:52 . It's easy to miss since it is in low registers.. but it's ok! just a minor adjustment would fix it..
wonder track (:
