Not bad at all. The whole mix just lacks a bit of treble. Easily fixed with some multiband compression on most of the synths. I would also do the filter sweeps in the mid section way less, and do it on mainly the synths, but not the drums.
I would love if naswalt would lay some vocals on this track
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Solid stuff
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Sounds really cool! (even though I might not be qualified for that genre)
Some IMHOs: The "drive by" sample has a single occurrence at 2:16 I would have expected a second use near the start - maybe within the first break?
There's a huge contrast between the rather silent breaks and the rest of the tracks with almost no dynamics.
The LP-filter at 1:12 is cool but the recover phase takes too long - sounds more like an intro than a restart.
The compressor is a bit too aggressive for my taste.
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Ill be sure to consider this in my next project as well
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Thank you
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Ignoring the global fade-in/out with the LP filter:
start - 0:32 (drums, pad, lead, bass are always on)
break (everything off)
0:36 - 1:08 (drums, pad, lead, bass are always on)
break (everything off)
1:12 - 1:44 (drums, pad, lead, bass are always on)
variation* (bass, pad, lead)
1:52 - end (drums, pad, lead, bass are always on)
Most of your track is everything on or off. I miss more parts that are like the 'variation' section which I like very much. Maybe more drum patterns?
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nice one. synthwork is pretty good!
