after drop i tink u should make kick more powerful but nice track anyway
Mar 27, 14
the volume scared the heck outa me wow
Mar 26, 14
the volume.. try using different more than one mixers, and also lower the volume on it so none of them are hitting the red.. that should fix the waveform bro:) also it seems the sound is better, it doesnt sound offtune.. although, MY OPINION, i dont like the sound, I feel it could have some work on it.. but besides that, it seems like u worked hard!
Mar 23, 14
why is the waveform so... fat?
republished
Mar 23, 14
generally fixed, changed the synths around a bit and did some mixering
Mar 19, 14
Some synths are a little too airy and at the drop the middle frequency synth could use a lot less reverb and more pluck in my opinion. Other than that the song is great and i love the beat.
Mar 19, 14
Ok thanks guys I'll try to fix stuff thanks
Mar 19, 14
Mixing could use some work, that sub is sucking up all of your bandwith and I can't hear much. The You might want to work on the timing of the "everybody," because by putting your shot in that buildup on the downbeat, it makes it necessary to have a SOLID downbeat. The drops do feel weird in context. There's nothing that transitions it into this sudden key jump. Like the groove when it's smooth, just work on the timing of your samples and fix that transition.
Mar 19, 14
i found the part near 0.50 a bit strange but you did very cool part, nice one :)
Oh goosh! Some hardcore thing. It looks fast. Is it hardcore?
Mar 18, 14
forget everything i said about the off tune thing.. i looked at the remix.. its on tune, but the sound on the heisenberg is weird the "melody" one.. i changed it to my previous made sound as bells.. and it made a HUGE impact on the song (good way), so just mess around with that sound and it should sound better.. (remember this is my opinion btw)
Mar 18, 14
nice one !!
Mar 18, 14
to me those chords after the build is WAY OFF TUNE! at least to me it.. also the waveforms.. turn it down! clipping a lot! also the second drop is out of tune.. try changing the sounds.. make it, like sandburgen said, more powerful!
Mar 18, 14
after the second build its better. with the clap on the kick
awesome
after drop i tink u should make kick more powerful but nice track anyway
the volume scared the heck outa me wow
the volume.. try using different more than one mixers, and also lower the volume on it so none of them are hitting the red.. that should fix the waveform bro:) also it seems the sound is better, it doesnt sound offtune.. although, MY OPINION, i dont like the sound, I feel it could have some work on it.. but besides that, it seems like u worked hard!
why is the waveform so... fat?
generally fixed, changed the synths around a bit and did some mixering
Some synths are a little too airy and at the drop the middle frequency synth could use a lot less reverb and more pluck in my opinion. Other than that the song is great and i love the beat.
Ok thanks guys I'll try to fix stuff thanks
Mixing could use some work, that sub is sucking up all of your bandwith and I can't hear much. The You might want to work on the timing of the "everybody," because by putting your shot in that buildup on the downbeat, it makes it necessary to have a SOLID downbeat. The drops do feel weird in context. There's nothing that transitions it into this sudden key jump. Like the groove when it's smooth, just work on the timing of your samples and fix that transition.
i found the part near 0.50 a bit strange but you did very cool part, nice one :)
Pretty cool dude, nice note work in this!! :]
Ok , yeh keep goin :)!
Thchoo !! Thchoo !! Tchooo !!! Touf touf touf touf...SHAAAAAAAAAAAAkk !!
nice
Oh goosh! Some hardcore thing. It looks fast. Is it hardcore?
forget everything i said about the off tune thing.. i looked at the remix.. its on tune, but the sound on the heisenberg is weird the "melody" one.. i changed it to my previous made sound as bells.. and it made a HUGE impact on the song (good way), so just mess around with that sound and it should sound better.. (remember this is my opinion btw)
nice one !!
to me those chords after the build is WAY OFF TUNE! at least to me it.. also the waveforms.. turn it down! clipping a lot! also the second drop is out of tune.. try changing the sounds.. make it, like sandburgen said, more powerful!
after the second build its better. with the clap on the kick
ok build sounds good. thanks audial