This is really awesome Waveform! Don't say that it's crappy it's really awesome! But to make it amazing I suggest to make it longer and don't have parts with only the delay of a synth working(it looks like that, if its not then I'm idiot).
haha djkellen wasnt too bad - i hhad a guy go round my best ttracks and he just wrote - "i dont like this - check outt my new song crappy sine waves" :/
and then he branded my ttrack witth 200 faves as "generic"