This is cool. The buildup was good. from to ish it was kinda weird. You should really take a look at how you compose the chord progression. Typically, songs like this follow a pattern of AABA, where we have one section that repeats twice, then it moves to a new section, then it moves back to the old section (sometimes with slight variations.) What you used is more of a AAAAAAAAAAB. The ending was a mess. It sounded like you were trying to use some cool chords but they all got jumbled up.
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This is cool. The buildup was good. from to ish it was kinda weird. You should really take a look at how you compose the chord progression. Typically, songs like this follow a pattern of AABA, where we have one section that repeats twice, then it moves to a new section, then it moves back to the old section (sometimes with slight variations.) What you used is more of a AAAAAAAAAAB. The ending was a mess. It sounded like you were trying to use some cool chords but they all got jumbled up.
thanks alot :)
Cool house mix! I enjoyed it!
yh at i didn't mean for it to be that passage of notes. but i rolled with it. thanks for the comments ;-)
hehe.. I can sort of hear twinkle, twinkle little, at 1.35 but the rest is no where to be heard. well done! :)
Sounds completely different, and very good, but this is not "Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star"!
thanks ;-) Means alot
Very uplifting. I like this a lot.