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  peacenature 2022-10-14

  cool

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  Noir 2012-02-11

  This is cool. The buildup was good. from 2:00 to 3:00ish it was kinda weird. You should really take a look at how you compose the chord progression. Typically, songs like this follow a pattern of AABA, where we have one section that repeats twice, then it moves to a new section, then it moves back to the old section (sometimes with slight variations.) What you used is more of a AAAAAAAAAAB. The ending was a mess. It sounded like you were trying to use some cool chords but they all got jumbled up.

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  Phenom 2011-09-22

  thanks alot :)

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  DeeJay Yago 2011-09-21

  Cool house mix! I enjoyed it!

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  Phenom 2011-08-24

  yh at 1:35 i didn't mean for it to be that passage of notes. but i rolled with it. thanks for the comments ;-)

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  yafee? 2011-08-24

  hehe.. I can sort of hear twinkle, twinkle little, at 1.35 but the rest is no where to be heard. well done! :)

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  Frigolito 2011-08-24

  Sounds completely different, and very good, but this is not "Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star"!

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  Phenom 2011-08-23

  thanks ;-)

  Means alot

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  Crypt-Keeper 2011-08-23

  Very uplifting. I like this a lot.