failed attempt at house sorta
idk how to make this shit bro </3
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My first critique ❤️ kinda nervous... (I PROMISE I don't mean to be a jerk I just want you to get it)
Okay hii after listening a little I've noticed that the whole thing kinda sounds but mostly feels out of key; like they're smashing together instead of meshing
My main issue is the "melody"/lead! Not to sound like an asshole but it sounds directionless and confusing, like you're testing the notes instead of playing a song
Of course of course happy to help! :)
tysm!! i appreciate all the crit!
and yeah it more than likely is out of tune with the same, im so bad at pitching my synths right lol.
the melody is pretty directionless for sure, melody’s are not strong point at all so i understand this is probably fairly rough!
and for the length, i structured it just enough to show my idea, as this is a failed draft.
tysm again i appreciate it :))
Honestly, my biggest 'olive branch' to you is to put on a house mix for like 10-15 minutes minimum. It'll do you so much good and your flow is much easier on the ears
It's not a terrible song, it just feels strange, empty, and confusing
Look into more house music and you should try again 👍👍👍
HODUR
Closer to the original definition of house music than this contemporary festival EDM house bullshit. But still not really house 😁
hard
and then I forget what I remembered
