I like that little reverb melody and the fact that you used synths (sad that that seems to be be unique on AT nowadays...) and I like that you tried to implement a lot of variation. Where this track still needs plenty of work is that everything sounds out of key. It sounds like you have 4 different tonalities going on in the track and none of them meet that much. It's pretty fundemental for music and although you can learn this through practice, I'd recommend learning very basic music theory.
that's pretty constructive which I appreciate!
the variations and different tonalites are something I try to make go together but sometimes I can't hear things being slightly out of key/tune. Making chords is probably what takes me the longest to do since I don't have too much experience with automations that probably would make things sound better. Again really appreciate the feedback!!!
That could help you understand keys, chords and harmony better. I know this is not too specific or helpful, but once you know how to make 2 to 3 intentional chords, creating something will become a lot easier.
Its good though i would like it more if it had some other kind of lead thats more like on going like so it dosent change from one thing to a entire different thing but except that i think it was pretty good also i liked it at
also the start was nice
I like that little reverb melody and the fact that you used synths (sad that that seems to be be unique on AT nowadays...) and I like that you tried to implement a lot of variation. Where this track still needs plenty of work is that everything sounds out of key. It sounds like you have 4 different tonalities going on in the track and none of them meet that much. It's pretty fundemental for music and although you can learn this through practice, I'd recommend learning very basic music theory.
Its good though i would like it more if it had some other kind of lead thats more like on going like so it dosent change from one thing to a entire different thing but except that i think it was pretty good also i liked it at also the start was nice
added more bass and layering
added some claps
I'll comment later