I like this but the instrumental could definitely use some remixing
Apr 14, 23
yeee I feel like @tricky_the_clown33 got it right: instrumental a little plain, a little drab. Nothing wrong with that, ofc. Sound quality is good, but could probably just use some spice to make it pop a bit. When in doubt (or if you're lazy like me), throw in a filter sweep. Lyrics are on-point. The flow compliments the instrumental. I think adding some ad-libs + panning would help establish some variety. The phrasing you're using lends itself to faster bpms. I'd personally bump it to 140 bpm.
Apr 14, 23
instrumental be lacking a lil, but hey, them vocals on point
Apr 14, 23
np bro, and I'm just looking from a musical standpoint, which is different from a beatmaking standpoint, but even then just not as full as it could be, try adding some can, and maybe a reverbed running pluck, and throw in a counter melody, and you'll be good
I like this but the instrumental could definitely use some remixing
yeee I feel like @tricky_the_clown33 got it right: instrumental a little plain, a little drab. Nothing wrong with that, ofc. Sound quality is good, but could probably just use some spice to make it pop a bit. When in doubt (or if you're lazy like me), throw in a filter sweep. Lyrics are on-point. The flow compliments the instrumental. I think adding some ad-libs + panning would help establish some variety. The phrasing you're using lends itself to faster bpms. I'd personally bump it to 140 bpm.
instrumental be lacking a lil, but hey, them vocals on point