it's very flat, the breaks sound stiff and uncomfortable, not only in arrangement, but in terms of mixing as well.
also, i was inspired by https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/VTLc5j82BCvsm4iP8 while writing this song, but i only realized in retrospect that i essentially stole the chord progression and most of the melody. (while making it worse in the process)
the synth design is poor (with exception to the main saw chord)
lastly, the different sections don't flow together well
that is why.
finally off, hiding this now.
hiding this the SECOND it drops off the charts
not off the charts yet ... :(
please listen to my other songs instead
i wasted such a banger description on such a shitty song lmao rip
wanna hide this so bad lmao
ok maybe is cool but the rest is totally bad i swear