00:44 it would flow better if you cut out the "fucking" there was no point to add that lol
lyrics
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Days sleep away, in the tapestry of grace,
Lost in the twilight, where time finds no fucking trace,
In this realm of tranquility, our spirits intertwine,
Ethereal reverie, unfolding dreams so damn divine,
Days sleep away, as darkness takes its fucking flight,
Whispering winds carry melodies of the night,
Silhouettes dance as twilight unveils its grace,
Dusk descends upon the horizon's fucking great embrace.
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(Parts of it being reversed)
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Days sleep away, in the tapestry of grace,
Lost in the twilight, where time finds no fucking trace,
In this realm of tranquility, our spirits intertwine,
Ethereal reverie, unfolding dreams so damn divine,
Days sleep away, as darkness takes its fucking flight,
Whispering winds carry melodies of the night,
Silhouettes dance as twilight unveils its grace,
Dusk descends upon the horizon's fucking great embrace.
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Nice sound design. But I’m with that one dude who doesn’t like the f words much too lol
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Thanks for this amazing moment !
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Amazing, I like how you incorporated the vocals
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Pretty cool, all i really think is that the vocals need slightly more pertinence or high end, then lower the volume a bit with a bit more reverb on them
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Seeing as you only added the vocals, that's what I'll comment on:
Not a fan of the use of autotune, particularly the robotic implementation of it. Ironically there's still a few notes that land a bit off key.
Creating some backing vocals, double tracking the lead vocal, and some adlibs would all be nice additions to what you've got here.
Only other thing I'd do is sink the vocals a little more into the mix as they're a bit upfront at the moment.
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I like it 👍
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i hate all the f words, fr
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i love the rest of the lyrics tho
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im just saying, i feel like there could be more family friendly but its ur song
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okay...
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bro cooked :D
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gyat dayum
voice a lil deep
beat FIRE ASF
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I like this a lot! Like virux said, the delivery of the lyrics aren't my preferred, but still, great stuff overall. Looking forward to collaborating with you 🤝
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of course!
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Alright, I may check it out then, thanks 👍
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it has autotune and layering for the vocals too
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not a massive fan of this style of vocal delivery & processing but the lyrics aren't bad. Good job regardless
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damnn
