Cover of track Dark Room by -Seismic-
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Dark Room

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Sorry for not posting much, I really tried my hardest on the this one.... (or at least as close to my hardest as I could)

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Please give some feedback cuz I want to improve on this type of stuff.

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    hurakan

    might have to like...

    uhh

    *remix*

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    DtripleJ

    how did i miss this

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      DtripleJ

      track. stereo is very important, but it requires mono to create a full and dynamic mix. without the mono, it feels empty. so for the chords, maybe have a mono white noise, very stereo supersaws, and use ur other layers to fill in the space and create movement

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      DtripleJ

      this is beautiful. most of the crit is in the mixing. the reverb is very upper mid heavy. they need some more warmth to them cause it doesn't match the cozy garage vibe. as to the future element, the chords only do one thing the entire duration of the track, so i would add more variation to the ebbing and flowing of the chords with more chopped and rhythmic flow to add to the technical complexity associated with future garage. smth that @ApoC had touched on is the use of stereo in this

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    ApoC

    I love the cinematic reese bass, and also the variation of the percussion. The thing at 02:58 sounds too wide or stereolized for my taste, maybe make it less in your face and more subtle. I would probably just mess around with the cutoff frequency or something on the EQ just so that part isn't so intense for my ears lol

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      DtripleJ

      i need to start using stereolized more often

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      -Seismic-

      Thanks for the feedback!

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      ApoC

      The stick perc oneshot needs more of a clang to it so you hear the whole thing better. I would tighten it with some distortion coming from the waveshaper. But obviously if you do that just make sure that you can control the range of it. That's all I really have to say about this song. Keep working at it, I'm very impressed with what you did with it. By the way I have listened to this song multiple times. So that's why I am stating things as of this moment. I hope it is helpful in some way.

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    malign

    this is fucking cool