Honestly, I don't think I'm the best person to give critique. But I can give you my perspective.
First off, what's good:
The vocal chops are absolutely stellar, and your choice of samples, foley, and instruments/percussion is on point
What stood out:
The intro chords don't sound as polished as they could've, it just sounds like a raw synth and in my opinion, it takes away from the overall production quality
In fact, the only thing I'd change would be the processing/fx and transitions
Guitar chops from some of Naut's beautiful work
Vocals from some aeiter's wonderful stuff
thanks guys
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BubbLz
about 1 year agoSo nice
MOOSEY ♪
about 1 year agowoah
Sonat
about 1 year agoThe percs and the guitar bit is just lovely.
Sandburgen
about 1 year agoFantastic sound man
tornsage
about 1 year agolove it !
tornsage
about 1 year agogorgeous sound - so good
sila
about 1 year agoGreat tune fluent.
I have some questions about the vox, but I am not sure yet what they are.
SlimK!lla
about 2 years agoThe percs sound really nice. Great piece my dude
Vulkron
about 2 years agoI think those vocals would sound better chopped... they sound kinda weird tbh. It takes away from the chill and somber vibe
Vulkron
about 2 years agoI wonder how this would sound with some light sidechaining
Apollo
about 2 years agoHonestly, I don't think I'm the best person to give critique. But I can give you my perspective.
First off, what's good:
The vocal chops are absolutely stellar, and your choice of samples, foley, and instruments/percussion is on point
What stood out:
The intro chords don't sound as polished as they could've, it just sounds like a raw synth and in my opinion, it takes away from the overall production quality
In fact, the only thing I'd change would be the processing/fx and transitions
fade.
about 2 years agoThis is absolutely amazing.
:'/ .
so much emotion.
nostalgic.
yur production is beautiful.
luv this <3
JARx バッドバイブスフォーエバー
about 2 years agoInwish my mixing would be as clean as this
JARx バッドバイブスフォーエバー
about 2 years agoLove the vibes im getting from this
joe
about 2 years agothis is fuckin niice flu <3