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This song took about 4 days to make(the longest for me ever) and it is CRAZY GOOD, pls give it a listen and tell me what needs to be changed
Sorry for not replying sooner I honestly thought this was a hate comment so I ignored it at first but then I realized it wasn't bad and I clicked on your song honestly it wasn't bad so keep doing good... GOOD JOBBBBBB!!!!❤
Okay, guys, im gonna post my own personal lyrics on here. If ANYONE TAKES THEM, I SWEAR ON THE Lord's NAME, I WILL FIND OUT. Thanks 😊, but also, if you want to comment on them, you can give constructive criticism because you wouldn't like it if someone trashed a song you worked so hard on.
Also if anyone looks at it and responds great if not no big deal... I'm looking to collab I have all of the lyrics and the song name I just don't play guitar and need a guitarist for the song if anyone's interested let me know.
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Reaction Test This song took about 4 days to make(the longest for me ever) and it is CRAZY GOOD, pls give it a listen and tell me what needs to be changed
the song that everyone will hate because it stinks
Last part I promise of Rain on the Roads Gets Tough:
Look at me,
What do you see?
Broken bones and soul,
{slower on next line}
You told me to go,
{music fade}
{guitar plays softly}
Fingers down my throat,
Rocking an unsteady boat.
It has always been for you,
I hope you know it's true{hold out true}
Rain on the Roads Gets Tough.
Rain on the Roads Gets Tough part 4:
Rain on the roads gets tough,
Look at me {Hold out}
Your piercing gaze,
I can never be in phase.
Once again tear me apart,
So I can piece myself back to the start…
The poison that burns me down,
Please take my broken bones and soul.
Will this pain never leave my soulllll{hold out}{Guitar gets louder}...
Broken bones,{hold out bones}
Shattered souls,
Pain will never let me go.
Rain on the roads part 3:
Don’t eat for weeks,
I’m so close to the mountain peak,
Maybe I’ll be good enough.
But when I reach the top,
I’m still so disfigured.
Why can’t I figure this out…
But when I reach the top,
The roads are still slick….
But when I reach the top,
Will your disgust dissipate?
Will I finally see a change?....
{Holds out change}
{Guitar Gets louder}
Rain on the roads part 2:
Would it change it?
What if it’s all wrong?
So sick of being disfigured by your disgust!
Why am I not enough?
{Guitar Solo}
Choking down liquids,
Just like your words,
Poison down my throat.
Watch me fall and laugh,
You do it anyway,
Doesn’t matter what I say.
Fingers down my throat,
Rocking an unsteady boat.
Would it change it?
If I were gone?
Would it change it?
What if it’s all wrong?
Rain on the Roads Gets Tough Part 1: {Guitar Start}
Look at me,
What do you see?
Broken bones and soul,
You told me to go.
When will I be enough {hold out enough}
Rain on the roads gets tough,
Look at me,
What do you see?
Broken bones and soul,
You always tell me to go.
These slick roads,
I stumble over my broken bones,
I’m so disfigured.
Does that disgust you? {hold out you}
I run back all the same,
Rip my heart out with no shame…
Would it change it?
If I was gone?
There gonna be in 2 parts cause there to long to be in one part
Okay, guys, im gonna post my own personal lyrics on here. If ANYONE TAKES THEM, I SWEAR ON THE Lord's NAME, I WILL FIND OUT. Thanks 😊, but also, if you want to comment on them, you can give constructive criticism because you wouldn't like it if someone trashed a song you worked so hard on.
Also if anyone looks at it and responds great if not no big deal... I'm looking to collab I have all of the lyrics and the song name I just don't play guitar and need a guitarist for the song if anyone's interested let me know.
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