Since you asked for it, here is some feedback.
your high end on the percussion feels a little distorted/loud. It is very loud. Also man this tempo is not for me, its quite slow. And long too because of it.
The melody synth at 2:00 is very irritating to listen to, partially because it is mixed so loudly.
As for the rest of the song, you add more elements but melodically it doesn't really go anywhere. This is a good start, but there are further heights for you to reach