This song is by far the most complicated I have ever made. It took about 3 days and was hard. Don't ask how I took that picture.

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  • Since you asked for it, here is some feedback.

    your high end on the percussion feels a little distorted/loud. It is very loud. Also man this tempo is not for me, its quite slow. And long too because of it.

    The melody synth at 2:00 is very irritating to listen to, partially because it is mixed so loudly.

    As for the rest of the song, you add more elements but melodically it doesn't really go anywhere. This is a good start, but there are further heights for you to reach

    • makes sense, thats why you put it into the song. However, it is too loud and hurts the ears of the listeners

    • I like the synth

  • I don't really got anything to say about it I think it's pretty chill

  • I agree with the previous feedback, it's very repetitive with nothing to really keep you hooked on the song.

    Also, don't use presets, you can get a LOT more interesting and unique sounds once you figure out how to use the synths.

  • How you got a mix this empty to have a waveform that loud is a mystery to me. This is 12 minutes of the same thing, with layers stacked. No variation. No harmony. I think you need to learn basic music theory, and try to develop your melodic intuition more. These things take time and I can definitely see that you're struggling with it.

    I appreciate your efforts, I can definitely hear that you worked hard on this compared to some of your other stuff

    • thx for the feedback, I will try to incorporate some of this into my song!

  • Sounds good to me already

    Though, I suggest adding more rhythmic/harmonic variation to keep your song interesting like counter melodies or a different set of underlying harmonies. That aside, good job, man. :D

  • love the progression, very simple but I feel like the violins need to sound abit more soft

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