You used a sampled melody and some sampled drums which is fine but I would really like it to sound like your own. Also I like the vocals but everything else I don't really like on this
Mar 16, 23
thanks for the feedback
republished
Mar 13, 23
LAST REPUBLISH I HOPE
Mar 13, 23
kinda slaps ngl :D vocals are pretty crunchy as well
ok this time im done promise....
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You used a sampled melody and some sampled drums which is fine but I would really like it to sound like your own. Also I like the vocals but everything else I don't really like on this
LAST REPUBLISH I HOPE
kinda slaps ngl :D vocals are pretty crunchy as well
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