I like the idea, but I need to say, this is harmonically a bit all over the place. I'd change the chords a bit, there are some strange dissonances going on.
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yes, I did kind of borrow from Lena Raine's Otherside for the melody. I intended to recreate the arp from Alko's Pleasant Feeling but I accidentally did this instead.
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