am(11/13/24)-am(11/15/24)
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flip of a collab i have with @gilbert_lake in the drafts
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i wanted some form of it out, because it's just stunning.
mind you, this is completely different from what you'll hear when the original is published, nor from anything i've made recently
i tried taking an untraditional path with this one, especially on the drums
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i want her to stay close
take my emotions and run
stuff them in a bag and shake them around
pull one out, read it aloud
so the whole class can hear it
might as well shout
"shout", i whisper
as you stay the same distance away
we could both walk closer
but we're too afraid
complimentary colors
im red while's she
blue, hazel eyes that never seem to stop moving
always looking for the next moment
the next glorifying moment in which she can find herself again
but she doesn’t understand
that if she could just look inside herself
she’d be right there
bubbly and energetic as always
waiting to get closer
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this just made my year, dude
i love you and what you represent so much, this really means a lot to me <3
Nov 22, 24
this is neat
the telephone thingy at the end is a nice touch
Nov 24, 24
Thanks bro!
Nov 23, 24
Anyways it was a neat addition. ;)
Again, this is neat.
Nov 23, 24
Thanks! It was a last minute touch I wanted to try lol
Nov 21, 24
cant stop and wont stop listening to this song :):):0
Nov 23, 24
<3
Nov 20, 24
11/10 actual song worthy nut
Nov 20, 24
hell yeah i agree with this skibidi comment
Nov 20, 24
this is so cool
Nov 20, 24
<3
Nov 19, 24
huge job on this ! I really like it
Nov 19, 24
hell yeah! thanks :D
Nov 15, 24
this is insaneeee, reminds me of erudite, got the same energy and style
literally love this so much, well done hurakan
Nov 15, 24
<3
Nov 15, 24
This is really kind of neat! It's atmospheric, melancholy, drab, but also strangely uplifting and hopeful.
Very cool atmosphere, very cool experimentation with sound and composition. Very interesting work! Nice job, both of you!
Nov 15, 24
tuned High hats and rides or panned slightly left or right can divide the percussive elements more cleanly in your mix without having to make as much of a volume adjustment
Try some saturation on your sounds. If you want some tips on that, or videos, hit up myself or Cal Lycus. Pretty sure Client knows what's up too, he can probably help with that.
That's all I an come up with for now, but if you have more questions, feel free to reach out. Hope this feedback was helpful!
Stay classy <3
Nov 15, 24
Also, the bass is lacking. I am on headphones, mind you, but I'm not picking up on too many low end sounds. They're there, but I feel like they could support the melodies and harmonies a bit more if they were a bit...thicker (for alack of a better term). Drums are also weak and flat. They could be much more dynamic/bombastic. a Nice crash symbol would be right at home in this mix, I think.
Nov 15, 24
the panning at is cool, but it's too dramatic. It sounds like you might be going from -100 left to +100 right. I might advise making that range a bit smaller, so as to not contrast so greatly (unless that's the point, ofc).
if the point is to contrast, then the switch over is a bit bumpy.
if the point is to blend, then it stands out too much. Try a panning range of like -40 to +40
i'm proud of the artist you've become
this is neat the telephone thingy at the end is a nice touch
cant stop and wont stop listening to this song :):):0
11/10 actual song worthy nut
this is so cool
huge job on this ! I really like it
this is insaneeee, reminds me of erudite, got the same energy and style literally love this so much, well done hurakan
This is really kind of neat! It's atmospheric, melancholy, drab, but also strangely uplifting and hopeful. Very cool atmosphere, very cool experimentation with sound and composition. Very interesting work! Nice job, both of you!