Cover of track trans-dimensional [demo] by Kibbey
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trans-dimensional [demo]

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critique it heavily, really get detailed with it

thanks <3

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    kurp

    vibes

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    euke

    fucking insane dude

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    kurp

    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAA

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    Vault Boy

    just gonna yoink that 40 like

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    solar plexus

    love the rythym, the way those hats kinda gallop along is my favorite

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    kurp
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    leadenshrew

    kraftwerk vibes at the beginning

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    ofvmusic ‏‏‎‎

    bro that drop it's too good, and the "buildup" too

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      ofvmusic ‏‏‎‎

      And about the stereo image, yes, it can be better, maybe more mid frequencies at the sides, like at 50 and -50

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    Snio

    holy mother of shit god

    not too much critique i can give. id say maybe give the bass in the drop a little more of a stereo feel, it would fill up a little more space as well as fit the tone of the intro a tad more. id also maybe add very subtle percussion during 0:14 and 0:28 , feels a tad empty imo. transition from the beginning to the chorus (or part when the arp kicks in) also feels a little sudden, maybe adding a small rise or having some sort of instrument slowly rise in volume could help

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      gawd

      "holy mother of shit god"

      pure wisdom

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      Snio

      other than those ideas i threw up in the air, id say this is a fantastic track. you seem to be regaining a lot of motivation lately, really like to see all the new stuff youre trying. keep up the stellar work mr. musicman :)

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    opi

    all jokes aside, this is super catchy nd cute

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    opi

    >sees trans in title

    finally, someone catering to my demographic

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    yito ☮

    Crit: The transition from buildup to the drop seems a bit weak, because the bass has very specific frequency range, I'd recommend either making the bass sit more in the Stereo, or adding maybe a fade-out, or a very mild impact.

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    viista☁

    this may be one of your best kib

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    etterath

    i like the rasselbock chords.

    that bass that comes in at 0:57 could use a chorus. maybe even a flanger or a phaser to make it wider in the stereo image and deeper.

    maybe bitcrush the drums slightly to fit the aesthetic of the track more.

    really cool stuff.

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    andy

    i love that beginning