still brilliant merle! hope you're doing well brother :) pay us a visit sometime. cheers
Scurry, scurry, worry, worry,
Like the hare I run about,
Busy, busy, in a tizzsy,
I only hear the voice without.
Quiet, hare. Do not despair.
The voice within is strong and sure.
If you just listen, you'll learn your mission,
Be confident and self-assured.
Forced myself to make this track in 2 sittings (A real challenge for me.) I feel like it turned out rather well...Comments and critiques are always welcome and as always THANK YOU for taking the time to listen to my track.
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nice1!
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BTF
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good job.
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Yeah they fall out of the mix a bit at some places but overall I'm pretty happy with them... maybe I'm just too lazy to fix them too :)
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another point. think drums culd be louder?
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yeah my style has also kinda turned drastically from one to another too before. I made a track of all minor chords with some deep wobble and sounds violent but ive never even tried that before ever and all of a sudden
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Yeah its funny too because I never set out to make "happy" tracks but somehow it happens. Some of my older stuff is kinda dark though. More than anything I like to mix things up as much as I can.
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hahah I see well its cool :P I was juss wondering :) looks like we'll both be fist pumping alone in our house to the AT party via livestream hahaha but this song is very happy I enjoyed listening to it. alot of your stuff is hard not to love and I wasnt real sure on why i wasnt following you already but i am now. not very many people on AT make specifically happy music on here I omly know three. you me and callykay
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@Dei Servus thanks man, I always enjoy when people take the time to make specific comments. I decided on the title because, to me, the bassline was very hoppy and reminded me of a rabbit. There's more to the story but thats the short answer :)
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but GREAT GREAT GREAT song :) Im glad this came along my feed :)
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hahah WOW love those sweet little pitch slides here and there and I can tell that you have a gift or rather extreme knowledge on how to right melodies, counter melodies, and harmonization for main parts and it really makes this song great love the chord progression :) all major chords? however I didnt really see how you came up with the title but its all about perspective of the mood I gues :)
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Thanks sKruhmpshus, appreciate your feedback.
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Thanks man, glad you enjoyed it.
