This is a nice start. However, I would fidget around with a heisenberg or pulv midi sequencer and see what kind of notes you can come up with. Because you have the main guitar in the song. I think it just needs more stuff going on. The percussion sounds really clean, I like how that sounds. There isn't anything wrong with the mix either. So I would say just experiment more with your sounds.
Jun 21, 22
Yeah thanks for the feedback. I'm still trying to decide if I should take a long break to gain my inspiration back or just post and edit what I've made already and I'm probably just gonna go back and post any drafts I like or edit any tracks I previously made
Jun 20, 22
More thumpy
Jun 20, 22
Maybe for the kickdrum, I would make it more loud because all I really hear is the 808
This is a nice start. However, I would fidget around with a heisenberg or pulv midi sequencer and see what kind of notes you can come up with. Because you have the main guitar in the song. I think it just needs more stuff going on. The percussion sounds really clean, I like how that sounds. There isn't anything wrong with the mix either. So I would say just experiment more with your sounds.