Love the melodies in this! I think the beat (especially kick and snare) hit a little hard wich spoils the lovely soft textures and soundscape imho.
I think it's because the synths are pretty mellow and the drums all have quite a lot of high end. Maybe you could try dulling them down a bit with some low pass.
I think that the 2nd and 3rd note of the bassline are off key, maybe is just my perception, and yes, like Celcius says, at
0:16
the pad comes suddenly, it will sounds better maybe with a volume automation. Annnd the drums sounds a little repetitive. But I like it <3, keep doing this stuff.
The pad at
0:16
seems to come on a bit suddenly, perhaps it could use a swell or fade in for a smoother transition. Drums sound nice and crisp, but a bit repetitive. Liking the slow progression. Bass sounds a bit airy without a sub underneath it, but it depends on taste.
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Leinholz
about 1 year agoLove the melodies in this! I think the beat (especially kick and snare) hit a little hard wich spoils the lovely soft textures and soundscape imho.
I think it's because the synths are pretty mellow and the drums all have quite a lot of high end. Maybe you could try dulling them down a bit with some low pass.
jordans3720
about 1 year agoCan I....Can I make a song to this? (exclusive rights)
Vulkron
about 1 year agolofi-ish, i rlly like it my g :D :D
desiree smpl
about 1 year agoyooo <3
Fluent
about 1 year agothank you guys!
kasel (on fl now)
about 1 year ago<3 always makin bangers
naut
about 1 year agovery nice <3
Archangel
about 1 year agoNice! I'd love to remix :)
MOOSEY ♪
about 1 year agowow..just wow..speechless
ofvmusic
about 1 year agoI think that the 2nd and 3rd note of the bassline are off key, maybe is just my perception, and yes, like Celcius says, at 0:16 the pad comes suddenly, it will sounds better maybe with a volume automation. Annnd the drums sounds a little repetitive. But I like it <3, keep doing this stuff.
Fluent
about 1 year agothe 'drop' comes in suddenly because it is started on the second eighth note of the measure. This is intentional
Celcius (older account)
about 1 year agoThe pad at 0:16 seems to come on a bit suddenly, perhaps it could use a swell or fade in for a smoother transition. Drums sound nice and crisp, but a bit repetitive. Liking the slow progression. Bass sounds a bit airy without a sub underneath it, but it depends on taste.
Fluent
about 1 year agocrit welcome :)
Fluent
about 1 year agoRepublished
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KingCoop唯一無二
about 1 year agoITS OFF KEY ITS OFF KEY ITS OFF KEY...chill dis is nice