okay dont judge me since i might be totally wrong.
but i think with this you should look for a different form of crash in the drop since its more bell like the one you are using. on a traditional reallife crash cymbal it usually has a bell part that sounds like what you are using. maybe go for a more lower part of the cymbal (like a fat S P L A S H) that blends better with the chords. also your bass (not the sub) might be a little harsh? turn it down 2-3db i think. sorry if im an ass<3
now that i've given some crit i can tell you that i really enjoy the route you took with this. im so happy to see you try out this genre since its kinda what i live for haha <3. you did a real nice job on this