69 likes? Lemme change it
For this song, my sister and I first wrote the chord progressions and lyrics (to be added). Our parents are divorced, and I live with my mom while she lives with my dad. This song is an expression of our profound desire to be together again. For the song, we wanted it to have a sort of chill vibe, but at the same time have a certain energy. So, we fused future bass with a little bit of trap and got the beat for Lost in The Ocean. Lyrics in the comments down below. Thanks for tuning in!
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vocals are near perfection, the track would need some work, good but needs some work, Wish there were more FX on everything, the song is also a tad empty. The mix is a bit muddy and your master needs some work, there are some highs that really hurt my ears, mainly on the vocals, and in the drop.
It's also a tad unenergetic, overall a pretty good song tho.
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@Akiri Lost In the Ocean (VIP) what do you think
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Nice feedback, tho ur kinda late xD appreciate it tho, O made a VIP of this already, if you want you can it out
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132 is an interesting tempo but works for what this is
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I submitted this for a national songwriting competition, surprisingly I won XDDDDDD. expect a VIP to come soon ;)
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still can't believe I was so stupid *facepalm*
nearly got banned smh XD
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The vocals of your sister are gud :ok_hand:
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4:28 I hear the licc
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I just realised Astrum is one of the listeners O_O
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Good stuff!
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the entire structure of the song is just too amazing. Transitions are really smooth. Vocals are on point, everything about this is amazing. Big Ups!
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the buildup to the latter half of the track is so nice, great vocal melody!
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sweet melody nice chords congrats
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Republished
Added effects, experimented with some sound design and basically mixed and mastered this to the best of my current ability XD enjoy lol
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It is a really good song... I have just a few tips, Add MORE effects to the saws (reverb, stereo, EQ, OTT, etc... and add more movement, For example, the first drop can be saws without and LFO, and the second drop you can introduce LFO and more elements to give it more character and "oomph"... make them flowey and fun. Overall, I love it <3
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Just realised, this is my most popular FB track. Can't thank y'all enough, 4 months ago I was on my couch eating rice with disposables cuz I was lazy to wash utensils XD.
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Yo this is epic... You’re ideas are really good.
