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Jetdarc
601 Sep 22, 18 Bass Music
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Bass Music Dubstep 8bit Electronic energetic chiptune melodic CC BY 115 BPM

i hate working on big projects like these in tiny bits and pieces, but apparently it had to happen that way this is techinally my 3rd dubstep track since the last 2 are old as shit

         
Jan 1, 19

That intro is pretty great for a starter, but the drop portion could use a bit of work. The snare feels quiet compared to the kick. The whole arrangement of the drop is pretty confusing. The excessive drum hits and switch from chords to basses are a bit difficult to keep up with. I'm not sure works. I like your sound design, but what kills it is the arrangement of the two drops. The second drop is a bit easier to follow, but it could do better with a little less drum hits

Jan 1, 19

i understand

Jan 1, 19

It has potential

Jan 1, 19

Not to say what you have here isn't solid, but it could use a bit of work here and there

Jan 1, 19

The more you do this, the more used to dubstep you'll eventually get, and you can eventually put something out that's pretty solid

Jan 1, 19

aight

Jan 1, 19

Try messing around with patterns and sounds, but don't publish them.

Jan 1, 19

It just takes a bit of practice and fucking around honestly. I know that's a generic answer, but it's really the truth

Jan 1, 19

but god damn dubstep is hard, at least for me it is

Jan 1, 19

thanks ya my mans, i appreciate you taking ur time to listen and help! Definitely gonna improve in the future

Jan 1, 19

Another tip is to look at other dubstep tracks and see how long all the basses and hits work for the general structuring

Jan 1, 19

Also uhhh where that outro at

Oct 12, 18

good stuff bruh

Oct 7, 18

jesus

Oct 2, 18

This is some really good stuff here. Namaste, JetDarc!

Oct 1, 18

Very nice dude!

Sep 29, 18

god damn teach me, god

Sep 24, 18

hoolllyy jeesus

republished
Sep 23, 18

a tiny bit louder