Poseidon [feedback?]

okin
39 Sep 11, 21 Trap
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ApoC
Sep 12, 21

More instruments could take this song to the next level. I would say a background ambience, like a pad or some of client's horn samples would fit this very well. Around could be a cool buildup, a snare buildup (1/16, 1/32, 1/64, 1/128 grid) do it in that order and I think it'll sound good in my opinion

ApoC
Sep 12, 21

Other than that, I'm not really sure what other feedback to give you

ApoC
Sep 11, 21

Just make it longer

okin
Sep 11, 21

Actually looking for crit about the flow don't care what just want feedback if anyone has any

fr[i]ght²n[eye]ght

yea feel that, definitely helps with depth in the track for sure

okin
Sep 12, 21

I mean just any feedback really positive or negative I feel like I should focus on backing sounds to fill the track because I get a good sound going but leave it kinda empty

fr[i]ght²n[eye]ght

oh the flow, not being a yes man but the flow's crazy for sure, fits so well with the vocals. agree with Apoc though, and maybe add some more percussion but that's pretty much it

okin
Sep 11, 21

feel like its messy