i made a poem, yet lost it
hope she understands, cause lord, ive lost it
it was perfect
now its ashes
im disappointed in myself
tears on eyelashes
it described it perfectly
yet not perfectly enough
it disappeared like smoke
yet not quite as tough
wisping along my skin
it described every flaw
im so distraught
when i thought i lost it all
i forget it and move on
screw it
let the music do the talking
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i genuinely had an amazing poem here, it was amazing, yet i accidently closed the tab somehow, lost it, and feel utter despair when i realized i couldnt remember what i wrote.
i suppose i couldnt remember because i couldnt feel the same exact combination of emotions twice. emotions change, so when i was done with one line, i would feel something else, etc, etc. till the poem was done, meaning ill never be able to remember it the same way
oh well, i made a new one, nto as good, but good enough
the music is what counts
It was very atmospheric at won't point but then we've been given a break. Interesting decision.
I think the gate over stayed it's welcome, but it was your artistic vision.
Oct 27, 22
yeah i agree
too much gate
Oct 26, 22
too long an intro :\
Oct 26, 22
fr
Oct 26, 22
That's what happens when you get into the draft 🎶🎶🎶✨
Nice mix !
It was very atmospheric at won't point but then we've been given a break. Interesting decision. I think the gate over stayed it's welcome, but it was your artistic vision.
too long an intro :\
You published another track like in 2 mins :O