Midnight Drive

at 01:25 and beyond I was already disinterested because when I heard the build start I thought things were going to change, but they stayed exactly the same, and I personally didn't like it. I can hear there are SOME changes in the second drop, but they're barely noticeable. You need volume breaks, or new sounds. Add some percussion one shots on those down beats. Cut the volume for 1/16-1/8 of a beat and throw a random sound in the gap. Youll be surprised what you come up with

then after basically nothing new happening, you repeat the chorus again at 01:25 and it's exactly as boring as the first time you introduced it in the track. It gets more interesting at 01:39 where the snare pattern comes in. I like that part, it's clearly a build, but there's not enough dynamic range in the sounds you're using, you're not making enough changes in volume or frequency. the sounds are simply changing in volume slightly, not tone or timbre, and that's boring too

between 00:40 and 01:11 I really dislike. I think it's the mixing that's making it unpleasant. The composition is there, for the most part. The problem with this segment is it gets immediately loud, and hit's it's maximum db for that part in the song, and it just stays there, and then suddenly drops off at 01:11 into the "verse 2" if you will, which is exactly like the first half again, which is fine, but the chorus was too boring IMO and so when you repeat the intro, I lose interest

Or what you could do is use the machiniste to cut the kick sample down below the 50% mark, which will shorten the waveform and keep that punch. Then all you need to do is add a saturation FX and a compressor. look up tutorials on using compressors on kicks to make them punchier or bassier. In this track, I would go with the bassier, more 808-sounding kick. Something with a little tail, and with less velocity. It's just too aggressive right away, and the song clearly needs time to build up

at 00:41 you do this sort of pitch bend thing, and I wish you had done that earlier because it would make things more interesting, or at least keep doing it after that time stamp, on every other measure or every third measure to keep things from getting stale. Kick drum comes in at 00:43 and it's too loud, and too punchy. I think it needs a bit of a tail/release on it (like maybe 20-75ms) with a release slope of 85-90%.

Oh thats understandable now

I don't usually leave the remix open because people steal remixes

Thanks

You really should

really tried my best to pitch them. keep in mind that vocals aren't a regular thing I do on my songs

That makes sense