id like to hear more. I agree with the following comments, please do not be afraid to be louden with your voice and lower the volume in the studio.
you got this man, also been working on my guitar practice so if you need more guitar tracks lemme know. I range from technical metal to punk to funk/blues.
Aug 16, 23
louder*
Jul 26, 23
The first bit of vocals () could be an octave higher, I think it would sound better, and then go an octave lower than you are at (). Try to get your vocals sounding less close to the listeners ear. Blend it with the background stuff a bit more. There needs to be more changes in dynamics and energy throughout the song. The punchy parts aren't punchy enough, they're flat and loud. I'm not a quantization nazi, but your tempo is kind of off too, you might consider re-recording at
Jul 2, 23
vocal technique could use work, as well as the mixing on the vocals themselves
Jul 2, 23
Still learning a lot about vocals, thank you for feedback (:
Jul 2, 23
needs some sub
Jul 2, 23
Fsfs maybe sub bass with reverb
Jul 2, 23
damn mah fault bro
i didn’t know it was like that 😔
Jul 2, 23
Feel like the vocals could have a bit more lowend, but overall, not bad. Definitely a very moody track
id like to hear more. I agree with the following comments, please do not be afraid to be louden with your voice and lower the volume in the studio. you got this man, also been working on my guitar practice so if you need more guitar tracks lemme know. I range from technical metal to punk to funk/blues.
The first bit of vocals () could be an octave higher, I think it would sound better, and then go an octave lower than you are at (). Try to get your vocals sounding less close to the listeners ear. Blend it with the background stuff a bit more. There needs to be more changes in dynamics and energy throughout the song. The punchy parts aren't punchy enough, they're flat and loud. I'm not a quantization nazi, but your tempo is kind of off too, you might consider re-recording at
vocal technique could use work, as well as the mixing on the vocals themselves
needs some sub
damn mah fault bro i didn’t know it was like that 😔
Feel like the vocals could have a bit more lowend, but overall, not bad. Definitely a very moody track