Its probably the sidechain compression, it is a bit too strong, you could try to shorten the release time or shorten the trigger signal and turn the sensing a bit more in the direction of peak compression. It is also important that you do not compress the higher frequencies in the track in the same ratio as the lower frequencies, otherwise the result will sound fragmented,especially if you use 1/16 kicks like in this track, this creates too much volume change in a short time.
There’s nothing that makes me want to stick with it. The melodies clash with each other, mostly don’t fit, and the rhythm just kind of trudges along aimlessly. Sorry that I can’t say anything more positive about it. Honestly, I don’t even know what you could do better. Better to create something new.
I can see what you're trying to do, but after listening to the original, I understand what sandy was saying. What is your intention with this remix?
FX and final drums (maybe??)
niiice!
I don't understand this remix.