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melody reminds me of gravity falls haha

i had a couple other meme clips in there like i normally do for my tracks. Ill probably get rid of it. Im thinking about maybe a third lead sound for the section without the percussion.

Only real complaint is that the meme at 1:48 really kills that atmosphere that you’ve created, and leading up into the second crescendo (drop. Whatever. I call them crescendos. Not even sure if that’s the proper way to use that word, but eh, whatever) the feeling and atmosphere that you’ve made there is just nullified by that vocal clip

This is very pretty. It’s got the sound design that I like; the neo-chiptune stuff that undertale had. It’s very powerful and moving, and it makes me think of when I was 4 and I would sit by the window and look at the sunset with a mug of hot tea clasped in my hands. It really brings nostalgia for better times, and hope that those better times will return. It’s mostly the chord progression that does this, but it’s that lead that really just does it for me.

i love making melodies. i always start it out with humming

so it sounds like it's sort of coming in and out??? idk hahah

maybe at 01:12 mess with the main melody by adding a reverb onto it and moving the roomsize throughout till the next segment

nice :) ty ill try to make more that has the same feeling

it's already got a smooth feel to it and sounds really uplifting and chilled

shit idk you're better than me so i really can't say there's anything that needs changing

thank you! notice anything you think is missing or would change? finna get some feedback

this slaps tho gg my guyy