i don't think i like the bass that much. i think it does need a bit more power, just a tad bit; and of course, it definitely needs some tuning. the interval at does feel a bit empty, I feel like you could maybe add some ambient noises there like rain, noise, a busy night street, etc!
you're on the right track! :))
Feb 28, 25
really nice!
I would recommend bringing up the first note of the strings up by two notes and try to get the rest of the notes to follow the scale of the song
trust your ears 🙏🏽
Feb 28, 25
Thank that actually so helpful I will do that
republished
Feb 28, 25
I'm still struggling to tune the strings but fixed other stuff
Feb 26, 25
I really like ! Nice work!
Feb 25, 25
sounds like the strings at the end are out of tune. also the mix need works - its clipping. overall good work tho :)
Feb 26, 25
was the clipping more towards the beginning? if so, I tried all kinds of things to remove it and I think it is the kick. Do you know a way to remove it? I will tune the strings once I get the chance
Feb 21, 25
smooth
republished
Feb 21, 25
fixed somethings
Feb 20, 25
Superb
Feb 18, 25
this is kinda the wrong snare to be using in lo-fi
also would sidechain and turn down the shaker loop a little
and yeah the strings are def outta tune
Feb 19, 25
then get ur own
Feb 19, 25
I will fix the others but I lowkey couldn't find a good snare on here
Feb 18, 25
its pretty out of tune
Feb 17, 25
almost sounds like the strings are out of tune
u could have used a better shaker
piano sounds nice
Feb 17, 25
i would agree with this @abedubabe but other than that its good
i don't think i like the bass that much. i think it does need a bit more power, just a tad bit; and of course, it definitely needs some tuning. the interval at does feel a bit empty, I feel like you could maybe add some ambient noises there like rain, noise, a busy night street, etc! you're on the right track! :))
really nice! I would recommend bringing up the first note of the strings up by two notes and try to get the rest of the notes to follow the scale of the song trust your ears 🙏🏽
I'm still struggling to tune the strings but fixed other stuff
I really like ! Nice work!
sounds like the strings at the end are out of tune. also the mix need works - its clipping. overall good work tho :)
smooth
fixed somethings
Superb
this is kinda the wrong snare to be using in lo-fi also would sidechain and turn down the shaker loop a little and yeah the strings are def outta tune
its pretty out of tune
almost sounds like the strings are out of tune u could have used a better shaker piano sounds nice
quite the cool track