Prod by WINTER ( @rbfl )
Will be available on all platforms soon!
This is just a taste of whats to come!!!!
UP NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please leave feedback if you have any!
ENJOY!!! :)
im gon make a remix, js mixing the vox better, i can mix your vox for u if u want tell me if u like ;)
Aug 22, 21
this was fr like the first beat i made :0
Dec 5, 20
Bro your 15 dang
Oct 4, 20
14? sheeeeshhh
Oct 10, 20
it didnt get published untill after i turned 15 tho
Oct 10, 20
i wrote the track when i was 14
Oct 10, 20
imma be honest
Sep 28, 20
(cont.) cuz when you speed up the flow but then you go mono, it just has this da-da-da-da-da sound and people kinda get lost there. definitely make it sound more like a story than just trying to fit all the words into the song. feel your lyrics and then translate your feeling through the mic. thats when your unique sound best comes out and you will find that your crowd tends to be more pleased (thats just a bonus dont do it for the people's likes that never ends well)
dudde spittin fax. check out my song I need yo crit
Sep 28, 20
ok feedback:
right now your music is like searching for needles in a haystack. you have a handful of hot bars, and the rest is more of like filler stuff thats decent. also, definitely keep working on your sound-your pronunciation of words is important as well as the tone of your voice. when you go hard, people should know. when youre chillin, people should know. try different inflections in your voice to make your raps sound slightly more conversational instead of just straight, monotone
Oct 10, 20
fammmmm listen to my new tracks i just posted
Aug 22, 20
I gotchu foo
Oct 10, 20
say less foo
Jun 7, 20
this is like some half-asleep homeless person rapping over some generic ass beat.
you're young so theres definitely gonna be some improvement but ight
also, where did those adlibs come from
im gon make a remix, js mixing the vox better, i can mix your vox for u if u want tell me if u like ;)
this was fr like the first beat i made :0
Bro your 15 dang
14? sheeeeshhh
(cont.) cuz when you speed up the flow but then you go mono, it just has this da-da-da-da-da sound and people kinda get lost there. definitely make it sound more like a story than just trying to fit all the words into the song. feel your lyrics and then translate your feeling through the mic. thats when your unique sound best comes out and you will find that your crowd tends to be more pleased (thats just a bonus dont do it for the people's likes that never ends well)
ok feedback: right now your music is like searching for needles in a haystack. you have a handful of hot bars, and the rest is more of like filler stuff thats decent. also, definitely keep working on your sound-your pronunciation of words is important as well as the tone of your voice. when you go hard, people should know. when youre chillin, people should know. try different inflections in your voice to make your raps sound slightly more conversational instead of just straight, monotone
I gotchu foo
this is like some half-asleep homeless person rapping over some generic ass beat. you're young so theres definitely gonna be some improvement but ight also, where did those adlibs come from