feedback ( honest and brutal )

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I know it's not the best, but it's the best for me, ive spent 3 days perfecting it watching youtube tutorials!

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yea yea

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main inspiration of this is tenjo

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  • I spent an hour on this I done pulled a Noah 🤦🏽‍♂️

  • the space needs to be more processed it's very raw and dry

    the clvr 808 is clashing u need to cut the tail end using the excl on machinsite or volume automation

    also add pads in the back

    get rid of the arasaka loop it does not fit imo

    the arranging is questionable i wouldnt just take out the melody randomly

    overall not bad at all

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  • this is actually very good

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  • Republished

    made the second 808 a less longer

  • growing on me

  • yo this was p good

  • Republished

    whole lotta reverb

  • I kid you not this is horrible all of my beats are horrible

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  • i saw your comment on naswalt's wall and ofc you arent a nine year old, how could a nine year old make something this good, but I will say there's a lot of empty space, but the start is good and it is quite melodic

    • meh I’ll try to fix it up

    • Empty space, that’s not good. A good song fills your ears, this feels like a solo potato chip for my ears while most other songs feel like a big plate of carbonara, nice, filling, yummy

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  • i’m in dis bih w clayco

  • work on the mix

  • Nice

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