All vocal credit goes to Nion
not my first track on AT.
Nionsomnia is one of the greats. His flow is unobtainable, unmatchabe, and sought after by many hip hop artists on AT. Really cool dude.
btw just listen to that hihat in that song i sent you. EVERY single sound you put in your song will give it a different vibe, which means that picking the right pattern/sample is EXTREMELY important and you should never just grab something random
u said u were new but this isnt ur first track on AT????
anyways,
this is all stylistic stuff but maybe more variation on the drum pattern? kick could use more lows, and add crushers to everything since that's the hip new thing to do now
if you're gonna have the early snare reposition the kick that's right before it it makes the hit unclean. early snares are lit but the kick is cluttering it. and nice track
wait.... I FUCKING HAVE THE ORIGINAL FUUUUUUCKKKK YAAAAAAAA
I WANT OLD VERSION :C
<3 swrlly
btw just listen to that hihat in that song i sent you. EVERY single sound you put in your song will give it a different vibe, which means that picking the right pattern/sample is EXTREMELY important and you should never just grab something random
sorry for being mean but you'll never improve unless im honest
agreed you could add a sidechain or sth
ok
listen to this and you'll know what i mean: https://soundcloud.com/cosmonostro/kid-atlaas-winter-is-coming
dammnnn Clu
and your drums are bland homie, they don't allow me to vibe
my crit is this has no bounce
you're not "new" lol
i like it
improved snare/kick placement
i feel like if i change the snare and/or kick placement it will screw with the feeling of the track.
idk about that delayed snare but this is dope so far. you're making a nujabes-type beat right (for the lack of a better word for the genre)
u said u were new but this isnt ur first track on AT???? anyways, this is all stylistic stuff but maybe more variation on the drum pattern? kick could use more lows, and add crushers to everything since that's the hip new thing to do now
hats could have patterns
abstract Noted!
if you're gonna have the early snare reposition the kick that's right before it it makes the hit unclean. early snares are lit but the kick is cluttering it. and nice track