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RHYTEXX
228 Aug 31, 24 Trance
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let me know what you think

         
Sep 19, 24

number one by myself damn, second number 1 wow

Sep 7, 24

i bet you this read wrong dude cant why u get it right read right it

Sep 5, 24

wow a chart

Aug 31, 24

i like

Aug 31, 24

fun fact the rhythm of the lead is made only with delay pedals, remix it and you'll see that I only used singular notes that would sound really boring if I turned those delay pedals off

Aug 31, 24

debate of da week: so, the first intro lead is perfect, I couldn't explain any better. The baseline that comes in after that could be just a tad bit louder, but that's alright. Maybe use a slope buildup (increasing frequency) on the countermelody alien noise thing? it could also be a little louder, a bit hard to notice if you're not explicitly listening to it. the bit crushed bass is also perfect. and then it ends with the main melody repeating and gatining

Aug 31, 24

tbh

Aug 31, 24

idk

Aug 31, 24

why is this a debate

Aug 31, 24

so, the first intro lead is perfect, I couldn't explain any better. The baseline that comes in after that could be just a tad bit louder, but that's alright. Maybe use a slope buildup (increasing frequency) on the countermelody alien noise thing? it could also be a little louder, a bit hard to notice if you're not explicitly listening to it. the bit crushed bass is also perfect. and then it ends with the main melody repeating and gating! overall it's an amazing song, you did a great job!! :D

Aug 31, 24

ok if the bass were louder then the melody would get cut out, and the counter melody does have a slope buildup, and it's meant to fill, not something to focus on, the psy bass is supposed to be focused on in the drop as well as the melody

Aug 31, 24

u wanna lab tmrw

Aug 31, 24

I'll critique in a separate comment

Aug 31, 24

any critiques on the song? good and/or bad

Aug 31, 24

ye

Aug 31, 24

we gotta revive TSC/BD

Aug 31, 24

yispls

Aug 31, 24

this is a certified banger

Aug 31, 24

i made this after playing some open strings on my guitar and playing around with the whammy bar, i originally had an idea for dubstep but then my sound design said "PSYTRANCE PLEASE!" so i did some psytrance