DXM!: Melody, drums, placement

Moosey: Vocals, effects

A song we made about some topics.

Comment how we did.

Constructive critisism is welcome!

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    (XLL$) jugg kid xoollins

    3 weeks ago

    not bad i like this you just need some more vocal fx but its good for AT

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    RADICORP

    2 weeks ago

    Slap some compression on that shit and you got a banger man!

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    Nuc.exe

    3 weeks ago

    mind if i remix?

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    AGbeatmaker

    3 weeks ago

    its a good track and you have a nice flow but the rhymes are to simple

    i am also a rapper if you need any instruction on rhyming hmu on my wall

    cool song!

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    Stormdrain

    3 weeks ago

    Hell, what do I know about rap. I can't criticize something I don't make lol. Just at face value, I like it, you guys did a good job. I actually wanna see how it would sound when ya'll get better equipment. Lyrics are great, keep going guys, and congrats on #10!

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    MOOSEY

    3 weeks ago

    oof! this actually charted YAY

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    Young Meek Productions

    3 weeks ago

    timing is off by a whole second

    but the beat is fire

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    Fluent

    3 weeks ago

    good start

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    U4IA

    3 weeks ago

    so most likely just make the parts that are so sudden more paced with the "rhythm" honestly tho don't rush trying to do that tho because it is hard haha but i wish u luck! sorry if i didn't explain it the best

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    U4IA

    3 weeks ago

    the beat is great but i think some of the parts of the song is so sudden :) and also parts of it doesn't sound right with the beat still great tho keep goin! :)

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    ⁰⁰MadlyMixed⁰⁰

    3 weeks ago

    mygaah thats a lot of tags

    2 more
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    MUZYYYYK

    3 weeks ago

    please add more effects on vocal. BUT IT'S SO GOOD :DDD

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    ZEE

    3 weeks ago

    You could put some reverb on those vocals to fit the atmosphere better. Other than that, great track!

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    flamento

    3 weeks ago

    Sick and slick. I like the slow feel of it, and its easy to listen to.

    Some feedback: Some of the vocal hits are a little off tempo, but I'd recommend adding a little drunkenness to the drums, emphasizing that quality. More complex bass variations adds another voice to the track, which could balance the mids and the pretty minimal bass. Also, it gives the piece a touch more variation. Overall, pretty hi quality.

    Keep it up!

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    .informant ♠

    3 weeks ago

    Just the vocals could stand for a little more life, cleareness, and activity.

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