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DXM!: Melody, drums, placement
Moosey: Vocals, effects
A song we made about some topics.
Comment how we did.
Constructive critisism is welcome!
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not bad i like this you just need some more vocal fx but its good for AT
Slap some compression on that shit and you got a banger man!
mind if i remix?
Yeah go ahead man
its a good track and you have a nice flow but the rhymes are to simple
i am also a rapper if you need any instruction on rhyming hmu on my wall
Hey ill send you a beat if you ever wanna collab with me and moosey
thx man (maybe we could collab?)
Hell, what do I know about rap. I can't criticize something I don't make lol. Just at face value, I like it, you guys did a good job. I actually wanna see how it would sound when ya'll get better equipment. Lyrics are great, keep going guys, and congrats on #10!
thx so much :D
oof! this actually charted YAY
timing is off by a whole second
but the beat is fire
Thanks. I think i coupd have mixed the beat a little more though
so most likely just make the parts that are so sudden more paced with the "rhythm" honestly tho don't rush trying to do that tho because it is hard haha but i wish u luck! sorry if i didn't explain it the best
Thanks for the advice. I think i get what you mean :)
the beat is great but i think some of the parts of the song is so sudden :) and also parts of it doesn't sound right with the beat still great tho keep goin! :)
Ill try and incorparate my beat more with the vocals next time. Thanks
mygaah thats a lot of tags
cmon everyone says that
please add more effects on vocal. BUT IT'S SO GOOD :DDD
thx so much
thanks. ill be sure to
You could put some reverb on those vocals to fit the atmosphere better. Other than that, great track!
shit i forgot th reverb XD
Sick and slick. I like the slow feel of it, and its easy to listen to.
Some feedback: Some of the vocal hits are a little off tempo, but I'd recommend adding a little drunkenness to the drums, emphasizing that quality. More complex bass variations adds another voice to the track, which could balance the mids and the pretty minimal bass. Also, it gives the piece a touch more variation. Overall, pretty hi quality.
Keep it up!
Just the vocals could stand for a little more life, cleareness, and activity.
Thanks. We were going for a little layed back feel. But i know what you mean.