I like the base of what you have here, but I think you should try to fill in the space a bit more. Without much going on other than structure changes it doesn't have much going for it and past the 2 min mark nothing feels new enough. Maybe you could make some light pads adding some nice harmonies, or an arpeggio or something. Just experiment a bit. I think sidechaining the kick would also help add some umph, but don't go overboard since that would get rid of the calming vibe you got here
I'm just experimenting, I appreciate the inisight homie, I wasn't the one who spammed the track lol
Jan 23, 21
Also, word of advice: though I'm personally fine with spamming, and you can always drop things on my wall for me to crit, most other people on AT aren't as lenient. If you're gonna send someone your track, I'd definitely recommend asking them first. That establishes respect and the artist you're trying to get crit from will be more likely to hear you out!
sounds like a coffee shop ngl
I like the base of what you have here, but I think you should try to fill in the space a bit more. Without much going on other than structure changes it doesn't have much going for it and past the 2 min mark nothing feels new enough. Maybe you could make some light pads adding some nice harmonies, or an arpeggio or something. Just experiment a bit. I think sidechaining the kick would also help add some umph, but don't go overboard since that would get rid of the calming vibe you got here
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