dance, dance away

owtlet
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tornsage
Mar 9, 19

i love this so much

adrian
Feb 3, 19

this makes me wanna dance, dance away

owtlet
republished
Nov 12, 18

bass movement at parts

owtlet
Nov 12, 18

@naut would you be able to do some guitar for this?

joe
Nov 12, 18

time lapse video vibes <3

opaqity
Nov 12, 18

i think this is nice. what it lacks in polish is it makes up for in character and neat musical ideas. to work on the overall quality of the sound try to make more interesting and dynamic timbres for your instruments. everything has a sort of 'static' sound. each time the bass and chords hit they make a sound then stay totally still for the duration of the chord. this can make it feel a little bit lifeless after a while.

opaqity
Nov 12, 18

i wouldn't bother trying to implement this idea in this particular track. try making a new track and totally make it your focus to make dynamic, moving sounds. and see if you can develop some sort of interaction between these sounds too.

owtlet
Nov 12, 18

thank you for the crit!

owtlet
republished
Nov 11, 18

picture

owtlet
republished
Nov 11, 18

volume edits

ego
Nov 11, 18

ohhh i like this a lot

owtlet
republished
Nov 11, 18

intro

owtlet
Nov 11, 18

thanks guys

owtlet
republished
Nov 11, 18

structure

bill
Nov 11, 18

this is really cool haha