It's okay for a first trackies. Trance are always a good start hehe, I started with trance here, too. It sounded worse.
Oct 12, 14
This is great! :D
Oct 12, 14
I know. No matte what I do I can never seem to get a good drum fill.
Oct 12, 14
its ok. u need to get better with the synths and use your own drum fills
Oct 12, 14
I don't think theres too much to criticize here. I really like this. I am extremely annoyed that the great arp lead in the 2nd half of the song is panned all the way left. Having the sound on one side completely for some reason makes my brain go crazy. All in all, amazing work. Maybe a percussive outro?
Oct 12, 14
You're on the good track with this!
Oct 11, 14
yes right. Sounds much fuller now. I prefer the slow part. greets
Oct 11, 14
to fix it you might need to make the frequency a little higher and maybe make the resonance spikes a little less extreme, but i'm no expert, so you might need to ask advice from someone more experienced, if this doesn't make it sound any better.
Oct 11, 14
this is really good, but i do have to say that it's painful to listen to in the first few seconds of the song, otherwise it is fine.
republished
Oct 11, 14
After fixing some synth issues and putting in a good drum fill, I think I got something here.
Oct 10, 14
Thanks for the helps guys. As soon as i can i will get those changes in there and see where it'll go. I think i'll also change up the organization of it, like add a other verse and chorus and change the climax. The drum fill is definitely going to go. I think i'll replace the machiniste with a beatbox and add some effects to taste. Again, thanks for the criticism. I really liked the sound and want it to be
the gorgeous.
Oct 10, 14
Fluxuating in intensity. Nice technique!
Oct 10, 14
It's gorgeous. I find it very relaxing. And at the two minute mark, I really like how the dynamics changed the way of the music.
Oct 10, 14
I like the brake in the middle
this has quite lot of potential.
The beat could be much more dynamic and the sounds are too much heisenberg and pulverisator, try to make them sound more special becasue its very 90s :D but its a matter of taste.
Just some points to give you feedback as you wished :)
Oct 10, 14
I liked the synths but the snare here is definitely not cool
That intro thou -For real thou
This is amazing!
nice!!
NICE! really relaxing!
It's okay for a first trackies. Trance are always a good start hehe, I started with trance here, too. It sounded worse.
This is great! :D
I know. No matte what I do I can never seem to get a good drum fill.
its ok. u need to get better with the synths and use your own drum fills
I don't think theres too much to criticize here. I really like this. I am extremely annoyed that the great arp lead in the 2nd half of the song is panned all the way left. Having the sound on one side completely for some reason makes my brain go crazy. All in all, amazing work. Maybe a percussive outro?
You're on the good track with this!
yes right. Sounds much fuller now. I prefer the slow part. greets
to fix it you might need to make the frequency a little higher and maybe make the resonance spikes a little less extreme, but i'm no expert, so you might need to ask advice from someone more experienced, if this doesn't make it sound any better.
this is really good, but i do have to say that it's painful to listen to in the first few seconds of the song, otherwise it is fine.
After fixing some synth issues and putting in a good drum fill, I think I got something here.
Thanks for the helps guys. As soon as i can i will get those changes in there and see where it'll go. I think i'll also change up the organization of it, like add a other verse and chorus and change the climax. The drum fill is definitely going to go. I think i'll replace the machiniste with a beatbox and add some effects to taste. Again, thanks for the criticism. I really liked the sound and want it to be the gorgeous.
Fluxuating in intensity. Nice technique!
It's gorgeous. I find it very relaxing. And at the two minute mark, I really like how the dynamics changed the way of the music.
I like the brake in the middle this has quite lot of potential. The beat could be much more dynamic and the sounds are too much heisenberg and pulverisator, try to make them sound more special becasue its very 90s :D but its a matter of taste. Just some points to give you feedback as you wished :)
I liked the synths but the snare here is definitely not cool
but yeah definitely nice for a 3rd track.