hope you guys are liking the new stuff. being able to express my emotions through my latest music is really helping me drown out all of the stress and guilt ive been feeling these past few weeks.

critique would be very much appreciated!

three more tracks to go :)

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    okin

    8 hours ago

    Here I thought it couldn't hit any harder, looks like I was wrong

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    Vulkron ( ͡ꈍ ͜ʖ̫ ͡ꈍ )

    9 hours ago
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    Vulkron ( ͡ꈍ ͜ʖ̫ ͡ꈍ )

    9 hours ago

    00:45 omf thats such a good sound

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    leadenshrew

    16 hours ago

    intro vibes oml

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    Tokofa_

    1 day ago

    Sounds a whole lot better

    its more pro for you my mans

    i like this alot better now.

    thank you for changing cuz now i love this

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      snio

      1 day ago

      naw thank you for pointing the stuff out to me. im just as happy with the changes

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    snio

    1 day ago

    Republished

    MAJOR CHANGES

    sound design in drop was cleaned up + addition of hats in the drop + structure of 2nd drop changed a tad + small fx changes/additions + bass in the intro doesnt slide and sound out of key

    some of these changes were rushed since im heading out of a town for a week so if a few things sound messy, im sorry. ill try and fix them when i get back :)

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    dannytna1000_gmail_com

    4 days ago

    worst trac ever ;;;;sorry

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      okin

      2 days ago

      idk how you can say worst track when you haven't created anything yourself, like legit im confused

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      snio

      3 days ago

      could you give me some crit on why you think it’s bad? i know every track wont please everybody but id like to know more than just “this sucks”, I don’t get anything helpful out of that

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    snio

    2 days ago

    disclaimer: currently in the middle of remastering (sorta?) this track. sound design is changing as well as some of the structure/drums/percs in the drop. also noticed the drop is a little too loud so gonna calm it down a tad

    will update you guys if anything else gets changed before i reupload this.

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    Tokofa_

    4 days ago

    alr

    i've been listening a bit, and i think the one thing your lacking is variation, your using the same synth in the drop, you dont change it to much. really, i would be fucking around with noise basses and some fucking nero funk shit, mixing it in, and playing with that.

    that's the only thing i see wrong with this so far

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      snio

      3 days ago

      alright, appreciate it it ton man. I’ll go in at some point and spice some things up if I can :)

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      Tokofa_

      3 days ago

      well

      the layers you want to mix, and make it confusing for the person listening how you made it

      for this, i can tell the layers apart, ik this is prolly one synth with a shit ton of automations

      maybe another layer or 2 to spice it up

      and this really aint that professional, really

      unlike frizzlebrizzle, or open your eyes, those tracks are incredibly detailed, with chants, and other good stuff

      but this, this has no detail, but the synths u used, with maby those little perc things

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      snio

      3 days ago

      thanks for the crit man. just to get more specific though, what exactly do you mean by the layers show/the track being unprofessional and disappointing? I thought everything was mixed pretty well but what do you think sounds off; what makes this track disappointing?

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    okin

    1 week ago

    This is what I'd imagine jetdarc making if he was in a angry mood

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    Tokofa_

    5 days ago

    I showed this to my bread

    its now toast

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    I showed this to a plant

    its now weed

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    SIREN (Hiatus cuz Exams)

    5 days ago

    I played this in my car, now it's in a car repair shop

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    Luxx

    6 days ago

    *sniffs*

    ahhh thats the good stuff

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      Perdition

      1 week ago
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      defunct

      1 week ago

      bringing back riddim <3

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