Great song bro!
I love the vibes of the beginning of this track! :D
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However, please replace that clap, I hate it sorry lmao. Also, kick is too loud. Good choice of kick tho. Also, try making the chords more thick, the bassline more interesting, and don't overdo the tapestop XD. Make it more unique and unexpected, so it excites the listeners.
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btw I love that switch up that starts at !
Great pad chords, outro is nice as well :D
Dec 13, 22
Thanks for the more detailed crit. I hope that my partner sees this and applies that to the song
Dec 7, 22
this has a lot of highs and lows (which both sound really good btw) but it lacks a lot of mids which give the song a full presence. i love the sound design but i feel that the eq is cutting out the power of the instruments.
Dec 7, 22
Beginning- Sounds great! Sound design sounds like something i've heard alot
Hate that clap.
Kick Feels too powerful in the drop, And the tape Stop is killing me overused
Songwriting Theres no Problem with that, It just doesn't feel... Full? Can i Remix? I don't need you to turn remix on, I just need permission
THIS IS EPIC - the transition to it was just too sudden
Once again the song writing is perfectly fine, It just doesn't feel full and i hate that clap
Pretty ENding!
Dec 7, 22
Feedback please?
republished
Dec 6, 22
uh, made it guud again
Mar 11, 22
ooh i like those interjections with the rasselbock, very nice tone you have there
Mar 11, 22
Personally I only like the Rasslebock on Hip hop beats, not progressive house ones
Mar 11, 22
very cool! i suck at rasselbock so i have all the more to admire this track. very good job, both of you!
Mar 11, 22
Archangel did that part
Mar 11, 22
oooh nice chords in the beginning!! :DDD <3
republished
Mar 5, 22
A lot of mixing, this is not a final mix quite yet since there's still a lot to do. A starting point per se.
Mar 7, 22
ill hop in and see if I can do some more :)
Mar 5, 22
Sounds pretty cool though ngl
Mar 5, 22
Seems like there's a lot of highs and lows but not much mids going on
Mar 3, 22
this charted. neato
Feb 27, 22
sorry I haven't been as active working on this in the past couple days (work is suuuuuper busy rn), but I feel like my work was worth it after hearing the final product :D
Feb 27, 22
love it!
Feb 25, 22
the first word that came to mind the second I hit play was "ethereal".
beautiful work as always, Apoc!
Great song bro! I love the vibes of the beginning of this track! :D ------ However, please replace that clap, I hate it sorry lmao. Also, kick is too loud. Good choice of kick tho. Also, try making the chords more thick, the bassline more interesting, and don't overdo the tapestop XD. Make it more unique and unexpected, so it excites the listeners. ------- btw I love that switch up that starts at ! Great pad chords, outro is nice as well :D
this has a lot of highs and lows (which both sound really good btw) but it lacks a lot of mids which give the song a full presence. i love the sound design but i feel that the eq is cutting out the power of the instruments.
Beginning- Sounds great! Sound design sounds like something i've heard alot Hate that clap. Kick Feels too powerful in the drop, And the tape Stop is killing me overused Songwriting Theres no Problem with that, It just doesn't feel... Full? Can i Remix? I don't need you to turn remix on, I just need permission THIS IS EPIC - the transition to it was just too sudden Once again the song writing is perfectly fine, It just doesn't feel full and i hate that clap Pretty ENding!
Feedback please?
uh, made it guud again
ooh i like those interjections with the rasselbock, very nice tone you have there
oooh nice chords in the beginning!! :DDD <3
A lot of mixing, this is not a final mix quite yet since there's still a lot to do. A starting point per se.
this charted. neato
sorry I haven't been as active working on this in the past couple days (work is suuuuuper busy rn), but I feel like my work was worth it after hearing the final product :D
love it!
the first word that came to mind the second I hit play was "ethereal". beautiful work as always, Apoc!