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  • Great song bro!

    I love the vibes of the beginning of this track! :D

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    However, please replace that clap, I hate it sorry lmao. Also, kick is too loud. Good choice of kick tho. Also, try making the chords more thick, the bassline more interesting, and don't overdo the tapestop XD. Make it more unique and unexpected, so it excites the listeners.

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    btw I love that switch up that starts at 1:32 !

    Great pad chords, outro is nice as well :D

    • Thanks for the more detailed crit. I hope that my partner sees this and applies that to the song

  • this has a lot of highs and lows (which both sound really good btw) but it lacks a lot of mids which give the song a full presence. i love the sound design but i feel that the eq is cutting out the power of the instruments.

  • Beginning- Sounds great! Sound design sounds like something i've heard alot

    Hate that clap.

    Kick Feels too powerful in the drop, And the tape Stop is killing me overused

    Songwriting Theres no Problem with that, It just doesn't feel... Full? Can i Remix? I don't need you to turn remix on, I just need permission

    THIS IS EPIC 1:14 - the transition to it was just too sudden

    1:35 Once again the song writing is perfectly fine, It just doesn't feel full and i hate that clap

    Pretty ENding!

  • Feedback please?

  • Republished

    uh, made it guud again

  • ooh i like those interjections with the rasselbock, very nice tone you have there

    • Personally I only like the Rasslebock on Hip hop beats, not progressive house ones

    • very cool! i suck at rasselbock so i have all the more to admire this track. very good job, both of you!

    • Archangel did that part

  • oooh nice chords in the beginning!! :DDD <3

  • Republished

    A lot of mixing, this is not a final mix quite yet since there's still a lot to do. A starting point per se.

    • ill hop in and see if I can do some more :)

    • Sounds pretty cool though ngl

    • Seems like there's a lot of highs and lows but not much mids going on

  • this charted. neato

  • sorry I haven't been as active working on this in the past couple days (work is suuuuuper busy rn), but I feel like my work was worth it after hearing the final product :D

  • love it!

  • the first word that came to mind the second I hit play was "ethereal".

    beautiful work as always, Apoc!