first i'll say the chord progression is cool and i like the sound it has --
but that hihat is earpiercingly loud and shrill. i would definitely bring it down a few dB. there's also no bass, so it lacks much movement or energy. and ik you dont want to hear that it's repetitive but it feels like an unfinished idea; it doesnt go anywhere different enough to justify its almost 3 min runtime. some different sounding sections would make it a far more interesting track