I Don't Dance

JD3 (NEW SONG!!!!)
350 Aug 19, 21 Other
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heyoooo! i'm done with this song. I think I got it how i Like it. please please please give me feedback on how to improve it. I tried to implement things that people have told me on previous songs. I really do attempt every piece of feedback i get :) love y'all, let me know what you think -------------------------------------------------------- LYRICS -------------------------------------------------------- I don’t dance Only When I have to Only when you make me Only when I don’t care about sticking out I don’t dance You already know me Already tried to show me And it’s not really working out But when the lights go off And I’ve been clocked out And it’s quiet outside your in for a show Cause my musics loud and the doors are closed and I’m spinning cross the floors Singing my favorite song Over and over And it’s so late it’s early but I stopped caring hours ago Spinning cross the floors and if you haven’t seen me like this then you don’t know me One second glance Was all I needed When I saw the way you could move on the dance floor, you put the world to shame Now I understand That’s not why you loved me, at least at first But I came to learn that the me after hours was the me you love the most I don’t dance I promise But pick me up whenevet I’m done with whatever the hell this is, cause it’s the closest I’ll ever get

         
HD
Nov 13, 23

Of course, I can teach you guys how to. --------------- Click Edit) Click samples then upload sample and progress from there.

HD
Nov 13, 23

I love it. Great use of your voice. Not many people use probe to record their voice.

HD
Nov 11, 23

Approval. Make this song remixable.

lacavocal
Apr 21, 23

I could swear you’re singing “but I saw Kevin hours ago”!😂. Not a bad tune, cheers.

nitexwl
Nov 11, 21

solid bedroom pop

F6CK
Aug 21, 21

beautiful

Th1rT33n
Aug 19, 21

I HAVE A FEELI- wait wrong song