Thanks to @callycus mixing and mastering
Hidden samples = my vocal and guitar recordings
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Shifting up to a higher level,
speeding up to a higher ground,
numerical outcomes in elusive patterns,
strewn along the line of knowledge.
Worlds moving in time for silence,
worlds building up lines of hope,
grasp an idea of something inside everything,
just a point of view our vision of worlds moving in time for silence,
of worlds building up lines of hope,
grasp an idea of something inside everything,
just a point of view our vision of life.
very clean production on this one. i honestly have nothing bad to say about this other than i feel like the vocals sometimes are a bit out of tune. but it's still not enough for me not to enjoy this track. just a god-tier collab with lovely atmosphere and cool sound design. great work guys!
Apr 6, 24
if that was seriously the case, then forget my issue with them sounding potentially out of tune - you guys did a GREAT job on noise reduction and stuff. seriously, if you didnt tell me you recorded the vocals in such conditions, i would never think of such possibility!
Apr 6, 24
It's always nice to hear what other artists think; it's always constructive. <3
Apr 6, 24
The voice was recorded on a smartphone one evening in a hotel room, and the quality of the recording is terrible. But I don't think it's out of tune; it's just that the background noise, even though it's been processed, interferes with the clarity of the notes, which can give that impression. Unfortunately, I couldn't re-record it, and you can't work miracles in cases like these to remove the noise. But I understand what you mean, and I thank you for the feedback and the kind words.
Apr 5, 24
Love the atmosphere!
Apr 5, 24
:D <3
Apr 5, 24
Hit the Heart twice 😂
Apr 5, 24
no fav ? ;) just kidding bud
Apr 5, 24
thanks <3
Apr 2, 24
fave part at
I like this concept. It's very pink floyd/the beatles kinda vibes. especially the voice. Sounds very John Lennon, who I am a fan of.
The structure of this song is a bit experimental in feeling. The synthwave/spacey feel coupled with the long reverberated lyrics REALLY create an atmosphere and a mental visualization. This is the kind of song you close your ears and lean back and sorta just let it wash over you...
Apr 10, 24
Yerp
Apr 2, 24
Thanks for the feedback bud
I am singing
Apr 2, 24
TLDR I really like this and I think you should keep working on vibes like this, because you've definitely got an ear for it! Please share more with me next time you make something :)
P.S. Who is the person singing in this track?
Apr 2, 24
Once things get going about 45 secs to 60 secs in, things REALLY land where they're needing to be and the rest of the track flows pretty smoothly, but I'd say from until about just doesn't quite flow as smoothly, and I don't really know how to describe it. It may be in the way the sounds are activating, maybe too much at a time? we might need more depth to your soundstage, and push some of the sounds in the back or introduce small, subtle sounds to sort of add more.
Apr 2, 24
I'd put this on a good trip playlist for sure, probably somewhere in the beginning just as things kick in and you're coming over the horizon.
David bowie is another influence I'm hearing here that I really like.
I think it's fantastic <3
As far as critique, there are some rocky feeling moments, like some of the intro, where you try to bring the listener into that environment. I feel like you knew what sounds you wanted, but you didn't know how to start it
https://alvmeta.bandcamp.com/album/road-street-sun-kitty-moon-tower Reminds me of these songs here
very clean production on this one. i honestly have nothing bad to say about this other than i feel like the vocals sometimes are a bit out of tune. but it's still not enough for me not to enjoy this track. just a god-tier collab with lovely atmosphere and cool sound design. great work guys!
Love the atmosphere!
fave part at I like this concept. It's very pink floyd/the beatles kinda vibes. especially the voice. Sounds very John Lennon, who I am a fan of. The structure of this song is a bit experimental in feeling. The synthwave/spacey feel coupled with the long reverberated lyrics REALLY create an atmosphere and a mental visualization. This is the kind of song you close your ears and lean back and sorta just let it wash over you...
Where's my water?
amazing track and voice Mir !