The distance and the tears
always the same month,
we are waiting for our eyes,
always seeing the moon
and the distance isn't too long
no one can beat us
i'm dreaming with your hands
and now we are together
touching it, smelling your skin.
Nothing is too long for us,
all this is too short,
like my lips touching your mouth
but the see is always blue,
your eyes are always like the sun
and our love is always, likea star,
which doesn't stop to shine.
I love you, star.
Not at this year, I will be next to you, that day. Our day. Love you.
Oct 1, 13
this is so sweet, i love this track!!!
Aug 21, 13
genial muy creativo, n_n
Aug 21, 13
How did I forget to favorite this? D:
Aug 17, 13
Your melody is gorgeous, first off. The atmosphere is brilliant without the drums. If you can figure out a way to expand the melody in a way that drums aren't needed, then you got a winner. I struggled with how to add drums in my track Isolation, and then realized, they don't need them! Ambient is a more melodic genre than traditional stuff. Overall great track!!
Aug 17, 13
put some more resonance at the slope to the clap ;) .... trust me.... try only... open the track and try ;) .... resonance not at all .... but maybe 70 or 80.... ;)
Aug 17, 13
ok and now the piano started... O.O ..... ok ......instant fav O_O :)
Aug 17, 13
i alredy see the waveform and they are fantastic...now i'm listening :)
Aug 17, 13
Yes @tophat maybe the drums aren't too good for this theme, I would try to change this :)
Aug 17, 13
Gotta agree with Jace. The atmosphere is great but the drums don't seem to fit it.
Aug 17, 13
The essence is captured perfectly in the melody..
I am not a fan of that clap and the 808 kit for this atmosphere.. itmade me cautious of the track itself.. meaning I went from listening to connect with the story, to listening for music's sake. The rhythm is fine! But maybe more of an acoustic choice of percussion? I am biased,,, hope this helps ^^
Not at this year, I will be next to you, that day. Our day. Love you.
this is so sweet, i love this track!!!
genial muy creativo, n_n
How did I forget to favorite this? D:
Your melody is gorgeous, first off. The atmosphere is brilliant without the drums. If you can figure out a way to expand the melody in a way that drums aren't needed, then you got a winner. I struggled with how to add drums in my track Isolation, and then realized, they don't need them! Ambient is a more melodic genre than traditional stuff. Overall great track!!
put some more resonance at the slope to the clap ;) .... trust me.... try only... open the track and try ;) .... resonance not at all .... but maybe 70 or 80.... ;)
ok and now the piano started... O.O ..... ok ......instant fav O_O :)
i alredy see the waveform and they are fantastic...now i'm listening :)
Yes @tophat maybe the drums aren't too good for this theme, I would try to change this :)
Gotta agree with Jace. The atmosphere is great but the drums don't seem to fit it.
The essence is captured perfectly in the melody.. I am not a fan of that clap and the 808 kit for this atmosphere.. itmade me cautious of the track itself.. meaning I went from listening to connect with the story, to listening for music's sake. The rhythm is fine! But maybe more of an acoustic choice of percussion? I am biased,,, hope this helps ^^