It's an interesting concept, bold melodies and harmonies, which is nice. If I could give some feedback though, There's a lot of overlaps in the synths. Long releses and such making the melodies overlap. This track doesn't have a definite harmonic centre, which is OK and can be executed excellently, but it ends up sounding very washy. I'd recommend doing some mixing, that could make the individual elements have more space. Maybe put some of the things more into stereo or play around with panning.
Apr 12, 23
wtf is that blender window
Apr 13, 23
it is
Apr 12, 23
I have no idea
republished
Apr 12, 23
Made it have more personality or body, if that makes sense
Apr 12, 23
Maybe add more reverb on the synths to give it a roomy effect. Also play around more with the velocity on the hi-hats and pan them more so they go left to right in your ears and so they aren't centered. Also for the kickdrum I feel like you should give it more body, so throw some tube distortion and use a graphical eq and boost some of the low end on there to give it a more gritty sound
Apr 12, 23
And also the snare is good but it doesn't have enough going on in the snare pattern at through so you could possibly add more to the empty spaces there in my opinion
It's an interesting concept, bold melodies and harmonies, which is nice. If I could give some feedback though, There's a lot of overlaps in the synths. Long releses and such making the melodies overlap. This track doesn't have a definite harmonic centre, which is OK and can be executed excellently, but it ends up sounding very washy. I'd recommend doing some mixing, that could make the individual elements have more space. Maybe put some of the things more into stereo or play around with panning.
wtf is that blender window
Made it have more personality or body, if that makes sense
Maybe add more reverb on the synths to give it a roomy effect. Also play around more with the velocity on the hi-hats and pan them more so they go left to right in your ears and so they aren't centered. Also for the kickdrum I feel like you should give it more body, so throw some tube distortion and use a graphical eq and boost some of the low end on there to give it a more gritty sound