zzz [SNIPPET]

Yxng Skxnk
78 4w ago Trap
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Trap

this is a snippet it's an unfinished collab with moosey elias MOOSEY ♪ https://open.spotify.com/artist/1egV4PLsjwGF8CQGwP4K0q?si=XIFFEAwbRWSwlpwTyreucg

         
KTWSTUDIOS
KTWSTUDIOS 4w ago

I like it but the vocals are a little static at the end. Other than that it was good.👍

Yxng Skxnk
Yxng Skxnk 4w ago

Aye thank you all for the feedback, its been very helpful and I will be using this feedback and taking all the things that have been said when I fix everything :)

Dudios
Dudios 4w ago

That ad libs need better timing, they seem very random. Pls mix those vocals!

Yxng Skxnk
Yxng Skxnk 4w ago

Like it says in the desc, its unfinished. That means im not done with it, meaning its not ready to publish.

RLcartographer

so u cant even call this a snippet or nothing like this needed DAYS UPON DAYS of more work so even get it close enough to being publishable

IAMMAARCUS
IAMMAARCUS 4w ago

nice , the vocals are unmixed but other than that i like it

SB28
SB28 4w ago

four things: -yes, vocals are too unmixed -808s start to clash at -just remove the 2nd half gng -give this shit sum high end yo

WXLF
WXLF 4w ago

i feel like the vocals are too unmixed and could be more blended with the music

Dream Infinite

Indeed. 🌟💫🔥🔥✨👌✨🔥🔥💫🌟

XXX NOH
XXX NOH 4w ago

Fire hip-hop song twin 😤💯!

Dream Infinite

(: Yvmw. Keep Up The Great Fantastic Work. 🌟💫🔥🔥✨👌✨🔥🔥💫🌟

Zanarking ザナーキング

I'm not gonna do a full review since this is a snippet. but I am going to give at least a few suggestions that I think could help. the first obvious one is the timing with the lyrics and the beat itself. I don't know if there's some sort of live recording feature in Audiotool and I hope there is cause I think I remember they're being one. I'll probably come back to this comment and let you know if there is or not cause I don't wanna leave you hanging fr. My second suggestion is dialing back the echo and reverb on the lyrics. NOT saying get rid of it because you can definitely do something with that, one thing that I would do is pick specific parts in the track to add the reverb kind of like going from a verse to another part of the song with that as a transition. And finally number three the Mixing. Now, you can take this with a grain of salt if you want because I am currently not using any headphones in I'm pretty sure somebody's stole my earbuds, but nevertheless you should focus on it. I'm not perfect either. I still work on it too, but that's what we do, poke out each other's flaws and we become better together.